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  • Leaning Towards Longer Topics and Shorter TOCs

    September 22nd, 2008 | Posted in Technical Writing 6 Comments »

    Everyone knows it’s a good practice to chunk your help material into discrete topics, but how granular should you chunk it?

    Take a look at this Microsoft Word 2007 help topic on inserting headers and footers.

    Example of a Quick Menu

    Example of a Quick Menu from Microsoft Word's Help on inserting headers and footers

    Although inserting headers and footers is the main task, the topic really has 11 related tasks:

    • Insert the same header or footer on each page
    • Make the first page header or footer different from the rest of the pages
    • Use no header or footer on the first page
    • Make the header or footer different for odd and even pages
    • Make the header or footer different in each section or chapter
    • Change the contents of a header or footer
    • Insert a page number
    • Insert the file name of the document
    • Insert the document title, author’s name, or other document property
    • Insert the current date
    • Remove the header or footer

    The author could have created 11 separate topics. Do you agree with Microsoft’s decision to group all of these subtasks into the same topic? Or would you rather explore each subtask as a separate topic in a table of contents?

    Although the practice of single sourcing encourages chunking of tasks, if you won’t be reusing the subtasks or related tasks independently, there’s little reason to separate them out into discrete topics. Forcing all of these subtasks into separate topics would severely bloat the table of contents (TOC), rendering it not only less usable, but also more intimidating. Your application’s apparent complexity would magnify.

    Separating each subtask into its own topic often forces users to click in a non-linear pattern from topic to topic as they search for the right task. This nonlinear clicking can give users a headache. It’s part of the reason why reading online is more strenuous than reading a book. Books provide more of a hierarchical layout and logical progression of ideas. In contrast, the web is a scattered maize.

    Consolidating subtasks into one topic also improves the user’s ability to find topics. With fewer topics in the TOC, the user can actually browse the TOC and find the right topic. But even if the user reverts to keyword searches, the longer topics will have greater keyword density and more likely rise to the top in search results.

    I sent a question across Twitter the other day asking whether anyone had done research into this issue, and Brenda Huettner pointed me to a Web Usability Guidelines reference book. Chapter 8 echoes Brenda’s response that “it depends.” The authors say that older people are slower at scrolling, but comprehension may be better because the user remains on the same page. Here’s an excerpt:

    Guideline: Use longer, scrolling pages when users are reading for comprehension.

    Comments: Make the trade-off between paging and scrolling by taking into consideration that retrieving new linked pages introduces a delay that can interrupt users’ thought processes. Scrolling allows readers to advance in the text without losing the context of the message as may occur when they are required to follow links.

    However, with pages that have fast loading times, there is no reliable difference between scrolling and paging when people are reading for comprehension. For example, one study showed that paging participants construct better mental representations of the text as a whole, and are better at remembering the main ideas and later locating relevant information on a page. In one study, paging was preferred by inexperienced users.

    Sources: Byrne, et al., 1999; Campbell and Maglio, 1999; Piolat, Roussey and Thunin, 1998; Schwarz, Beldie and Pastoor, 1983; Spool, et al., 1997; Spyridakis, 2000.

    In other words, each time a page loads, you interrupt the user’s thought process. By remaining on the same page, the user can better grasp the concept as a whole.

    Thanks for the resource, Brenda! In the studies, the content consisted of web pages rather than help material. Some of the examples for scrolling depict long, sophisticated pages — quite a bit more hairy than the Word example above. Still, I agree with the general findings and think they apply to help authoring.

    My colleague Ben Minson, however, raises an important objection to long topics. He says,

    In reality, people don’t want long topics. They want to think that procedures are short and simple. Long topics intimidate people and make them reluctant to consult the documentation in the future. (“Long Topics: A Help Author’s Crime Against Humanity“)

    I agree that no one wants to be confronted with a massive topic when all they need is information to complete simple task. However, adding a quick topic menu at the top, similar to the following image, seems to solve that problem, doesn’t it? The user can jump immediately to the relevant topic, rather than meticulously scrolling down and checking each heading.

    [image title="Example of a Quick Menu" size="full" id="2017" align="left" linkto="viewer" ]

    Overall, in my experience, it’s easy for a help’s TOC to grow successively larger as you think of more and more scenarios, possible tasks, and concepts to explain. But if you reach the end of the project and see that your initial 50 topics have grown to 250, I think something’s wrong. Most applications aren’t that complicated. When users expand the TOC and find a seemingly infinite number of topics, it’s the equivalent of the disheartening “thud” from a long printed manual.

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    6 Responses to “Leaning Towards Longer Topics and Shorter TOCs”

    1. Gordon says:

      Not quite sure what you are suggesting here Tom. Chunking content into small discrete topics is one thing, but that doesn’t mean you have to display them as discrete help topics if you don’t deem that appropriate.

      The approach taken by Microsoft isn’t bad though, but perhaps it makes the user work a little too hard to get to the information. If I’m using online help, gimme the answer to my question quickly and let me get back to work. With that in mind, I’ve have the mini-TOC right at the top of the page (thus acting as a reasonable Landing Point for users to get them to the info they need ASAP)

      As for huge big TOCs… how many people actually use them? *I* always head to the search first, and it’s only after that the TOC becomes a little more useful in displaying my location in the help system.

      Perhaps we should do away with the TOC completely. After all it’s a remnant of the book era and may no longer be applicable in the world of online user assistance.

      Gordons last blog post..UA Conference Notes – Day 2

    2. Another thing to consider is that the TOC doesn’t have to include absolutely every topic in the Help file. The HATs seem to make it like that’s the way it has to be done, but it’s OK to leave topics out…for example, in the example above, including just one entry on the TOC for “Headers and Footers” and not for each individual entry.

      Like Gordon, though, I don’t use the TOC, which is just one person’s way of organizing the material in the Help file. I typically use Search first.

      Char James-Tannys last blog post..Authoring tool survey now posted…

    3. Matt Brown says:

      Good stuff Tom.
      To me the task list is the most important thing if the topic is this broad (and many topics are this broad by necessity).

      It is very important to me that this list appears ‘above the fold’ to steal a newspaper term – at least the heading and some of the tasks should show in the default help window without scrolling, as an important clue.

      If you put in an intro para (or picture) preceding the task list that bumps that task list out of the default window, a user might never scroll and see the task list. The previous version of Word help that I have has no graphic, and Joe Friday’s (Just the facts ma’am) the task list in line 1 of the Help.

      After that, In my opinion, how big or small your topic chunks are depends upon how well your help (and the tool that built it) handles bookmarks, and whether you have a Back button or breadcrumbs as navigation aids. If you make little chunks and then strand your users at them, any click that takes them to a topic other than the one that exactly answers their question becomes a negative.

    4. 4Fear says:

      i think there are a few examples of this,
      in the Flare help system does the same, similarly in Microsoft help systems, see the help system for Visual Source Safe 2005.

      They use lots of Drop-down text links or bookmark links…”In this section…x, y , z.”

      When you look at this example, it works for ‘Insert headers and footers’ because this is covering the different subtle variants of ‘inserting headers and footers’ that users might want to achieve.

      PS. I prefer a See Also link at the bottom of a topic to achieve the same effect, except that links are not displayed in menu but is simply a section of a topic that explicitly displays all the related topics for the user to choose.

    5. Manjusha says:

      A very good post.

      I think, chunking is definitely a good idea. I also like the idea of seeing a TOC list the sub topics in a topic. A main heading and a hyperlinked list under it that tells you what you can find in the section. So, by default, it also tells you what you will not find here – that is the one time when I feel my time has been completely wasted – when I’ve read a whole topic and discovered that it doesn’t contain the information I was looking for.

      I go for searches as well. Most people do, I suppose. But searches become complicated in scenarios when you think of something as A, but the people who wrote the help decided to label it B. A TOC/list can solve this problem since most people will recognize what they are looking for when they see it spelt out there.

      TOCs, other than listing what a topic covers, also give a form and flow to the main topic, giving the users an idea of what follows what.

      But sometimes, like Gordon pointed out, we just want quick information about something – and that’s when I feel we need both TOCs and alphabetical indexes!

      A TOC that runs long can be a problem of course, but not a bigger problem than not knowing what he topic covers. For larger topics that contain many sub-topics, this is all the more important.

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